DESIGN: This is a beautiful design, the loading page menu bar is very different, and if each word was a link, it would be fabulous. That is a very tedious job, one that we don’t have time for but if finished off would be a great portfolio piece. What is nice to see is how you came up with such an interesting site, from your research – the history of the color purple, even the simple design adds sophistication to the website. It is pretty obvious that you have an art degree. Your use of soft color, script typeface and the banner rectangle add depth and variety to your design. ( in other words good use of 2D design principles) Very lyrical, sophisticated and has interactivity that is integrated.. TECHNICAL: CODE: Your user interactivity is dynamic and simple. Your code is pretty good – simple with nested and straight forward classes and tags. You must close all your tags - where does the p tag close? be careful it might cause some problems in different browsers - good protocol --> Also remember to comment out on all your code for better understanding. And on the nobility page, the text falls below the page end – you could have a scroll – easy as it is under positioning > overflow > scroll – but that is a little ugly – needs to be skinned OR make the page longer. Also when doing text – it can be set in the wrapper or containing box – only once then changed closer to the objects when needed. BLOG/RESEARCH/WIREFRAME: All is there but the wireframe. You have done an excellent job, I am able to work my way through the process but I would like a bit more of the intermediately steps and explanation – particularly when you have the final design and the idea that t is an education site etc. I need your menu List test!
DESIGN: This is a beautiful design, the loading page menu bar is very different, and if each word was a link, it would be fabulous. That is a very tedious job, one that we don’t have time for but if finished off would be a great portfolio piece. What is nice to see is how you came up with such an interesting site, from your research – the history of the color purple, even the simple design adds sophistication to the website. It is pretty obvious that you have an art degree. Your use of soft color, script typeface and the banner rectangle add depth and variety to your design. ( in other words good use of 2D design principles) Very lyrical, sophisticated and has interactivity that is integrated..
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Your user interactivity is dynamic and simple. Your code is pretty good – simple with nested and straight forward classes and tags. You must close all your tags - where does the p tag close? be careful it might cause some problems in different browsers - good protocol -->
Also remember to comment out on all your code for better understanding.
And on the nobility page, the text falls below the page end – you could have a scroll – easy as it is under positioning > overflow > scroll – but that is a little ugly – needs to be skinned OR make the page longer. Also when doing text – it can be set in the wrapper or containing box – only once then changed closer to the objects when needed.
BLOG/RESEARCH/WIREFRAME: All is there but the wireframe. You have done an excellent job, I am able to work my way through the process but I would like a bit more of the intermediately steps and explanation – particularly when you have the final design and the idea that t is an education site etc. I need your menu List test!